“Supernatural” by Dawn Pisturino

When you held my hand
your fingers felt limp and cold
like a corpse reaching out from its coffin.
When you called me dear
your voice sounded thin and hollow
distant and indistinct
like a shadow calling out from beyond the grave.
When you finally left me
you ruminated about the weather
record-breaking temperatures
hot autumn days
last-minute gardening
in that empty deadpan tone
and I knew I would never see you again.
Lying awake
in the dark recesses of the night,
I ponder these momentous events and wonder:
Were you ever really there—
or just a figment of my imagination?

Copyright © 2024 Dawn Pisturino
All Rights Reserved


Dawn Pisturino is a retired nurse in Arizona whose publishing credits include poems, limericks, short stories, and articles. Her poetry has appeared in several anthologies, most recently in Hidden in Childhood: A Poetry Anthology, Wounds I Healed: The Poetry of Strong Women, and the 2023 Arizona Literary Magazine. She is a Mystery Writers of America and Arizona Authors Association member.

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27 Comments Add yours

  1. michnavs says:

    oh, this just felt home to me😑

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    1. Yes, some people do feel like ghosts when they are so cold, distant, and uninviting. Thank you, Michelle!

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  2. Meelosmom says:

    I love haunting poems. Thank you for submitting this one, Dawn! We appreciate your ongoing collaborations!

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    1. Thank you, Barbara!

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      1. Meelosmom says:

        It’s my pleasure!

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  3. Bianca Alina says:

    Brilliantly written, Dawn! ♥️🌹

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    1. Thank you, Bianca!

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      1. Bianca Alina says:

        It’s my pleasure! ♥️🌹

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  4. And therein lies the questing, Dawn. congrats.. chillingly written!! 🙌🏽👏

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    1. Thank you, Cindy!

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      1. You’re so welcome, always💓

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  5. This poem is very compelling ❤️‍🔥

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    1. Thank you, Robbie!

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  6. Michele Lee says:

    Oh, that is a gripping ending! Some endings have no closure.

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    1. Thank you, Michelle!

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  7. It’s dark and feels lonely but it is a very beautiful and poignant poem.

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    1. Thank you, Thomas!

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  8. jonicaggiano says:

    Dawn this is such a deeply felt piece. Sounds like the behavior of a partner going through the motions with no sense of real caring. Great writing Dawn. Big hugs and love – Always love to read you here, Joni

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  9. joy gerken says:

    I enjoyed these words,speak reams to many. Thanks you !

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  10. Congratulations, Dawn! Your poem is hauntingly beautiful! ❤️

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    1. Thank you, Lauren!

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      1. You’re welcome, Dawn!

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